Monday, 17 November 2025

Editorial Review: Millie’s Escape (Hartford Manor Book 4) by Marcia Clayton


Millie’s Escape 
(Hartford Manor Book 4)
By Marcia Clayton


Publication Date: 2nd November 2023
Publisher: Sunhillow Publishing
Page Length: 250
Genre: Historical Fiction

1885 North Devon, England

It is winter in the small Devon village of Brampford Speke, and a typhoid epidemic has claimed many victims. Millie, aged fifteen, is doing her best to nurse her mother and grandmother as well as look after Jonathan, her five-year-old brother. One morning, Millie is horrified to find that her mother, Rosemary, has passed away during the night and is terrified the same fate may befall her granny, Emily.

When Emily's neighbours inform her that Sir Edgar Grantley has also perished from the deadly disease, the old woman is distraught, for the kindly gentleman has been their benefactor for many years, much to the disgust of his wife, Lilliana. Emily is well aware that Sir Edgar’s generosity has long been a bone of contention between him and his spouse, and she is certain Lady Grantley will evict them from their cottage at the first opportunity.

As she racks her brain for a solution, Emily remembers her father came from Hartford, a seaside village in North Devon and had relatives there. Desperate and too weak to travel, she insists Millie and Jonathan leave home and make their way to Hartford before the embittered woman can cause trouble for them. There, she tells them, they must throw themselves on the mercy of their family and hope they will offer them a home.

With Emily promising to follow them as soon as possible, the two youngsters reluctantly set off on their fifty-mile journey on foot and in the harshest of weather conditions. Emily warns them to be cautious, for she suspects Lady Grantley may well pursue them to seek revenge for a situation that has existed between the two families for many years.



In the depths of winter, as a cold bitterness blankets the quaint village of Brampford Speke, an air of despair hangs heavy among its residents. A deadly typhoid epidemic ravages the village, stealing lives and hope alike.

But for the Gibbs family, their trials are only just beginning. 

With Sir Edgar’s death, his wife, Lady Lilliana, can finally throw his husband’s mistress, Rosemary Gibbs, and her family out, but she has other plans for Millie, Sir Edgar’s illegitimate daughter; she wants to see the 15-year-old rot in jail. 

But first, she has to find her.

"Millie’s Escape (Hartford Manor Book 4)" by Marcia Clayton is a captivating addition to the Hartford series, weaving together rich character development and intricate plot twists.

Once again, the reader finds themselves immersed in the story of the ever-expanding Carter family. The close emotional bonds that tie this family together are truly heart-warming and serve as a testament to their enduring love. 

With the death of Sir Edgar Grantley, Lady Lilliana Grantley is consumed by a thirst for revenge. Having endured years of deep bitterness and rage at her husband's infidelity, she now has the chance to extract her revenge. Edgar's mistress lives rent-free on the estate with her two bastard children, whereas Lilliana remains childless, a fact that only exacerbates her resentment. Although the reader may have sympathised with her, they cannot because her actions are truly reprehensible, as she takes out her anger on the wrong people - an old woman, and her husband's children. There is no empathy in her character, making her a decidedly unlikable woman.

Millie is an incredibly resourceful young lady, driven by a fierce determination to reach Hartford, a place her grandmother has described as home to their long-lost family. Accompanied by her younger brother, Jonathan, the siblings embark on a treacherous journey during the harsh depths of winter, where the biting cold and relentless snow create a forbidding landscape. As they traverse the icy terrain, navigating through freezing temperatures, they encounter a wide range of characters—some embodying kindness and generosity, and others who reveal the darker shades of humanity. Despite facing the relentless challenges of their quest, including hunger, exhaustion, and the constant threat of danger from Lady Lilliana, Millie’s unwavering spirit shines through. Her resilience is a beacon, and her sense of responsibility for Jonathan never falters, as she ensures his safety and comfort in the face of adversity. With every step towards Hartford, Millie’s determination grows stronger. She clings to the hope of reuniting with family, fuelling her resolve to overcome any obstacle in their path. No matter how daunting the journey becomes, she remains resolute in her mission to reach Hartford, ready to confront whatever trials await.

Betsey Carter, a character we were first introduced to in the prequel to this series, is now in her golden years. With her husband facing serious health challenges, she is contemplating the difficult decision of retiring from running their beloved pub, a place that has been a cornerstone of their lives but now must be passed on to the next generation. In this instalment of the series, Betsey is finally given the opportunity to unveil a long-held secret that she has guarded for decades and can finally find some closure.

The series features a vast and diverse cast of characters, each intricately woven into the storyline. As a result, "Millie’s Escape" does not standalone. While the author makes a commendable effort to provide background information on key figures, readers who are not already familiar with every character may find it challenging to fully grasp the nuances and implications of this story. To appreciate the richness of the narrative, it is helpful to have an understanding of the complex relationships and past events that shape the characters’ actions and decisions.

The attention to the historical era has once again been masterfully portrayed. From the opulence of the wealthy, with their lavish estates, to the stark realities faced by the impoverished, Clayton has expertly depicted the complexities of late 19th-century North Devon. The stark contrasts between social classes are vividly illustrated, showcasing not only the grandeur of wealth with ornate furnishings and elegant fashion but also the harsh conditions endured by the poorest, who inhabit cramped, dilapidated cottages. The narrative captures the essence of this transformative period, reflecting the societal struggles and moral depravity that often lie beneath the surface of prosperity.

Through this novel, Clayton poignantly illustrates that individuals from impoverished backgrounds often display greater charity and compassion than their wealthier counterparts. The affluent lead lives of privilege and comfort, benefitting from a societal structure that often overlooks the struggles of the less fortunate. The narrative reveals that while virtuous and self-serving individuals can be found at all societal levels, a notable trend is observed among the poor: they tend to support and care for one another, forming a tight-knit community when facing hardship. A powerful example of this dynamic is the treatment of Emily Gibbs, an elderly woman suffering from a severe case of typhoid fever. Lady Lilliana’s callousness towards Emily is disturbingly evident; she treats Emily with utter disdain, reflecting her privilege and lack of empathy. Even the vicar, a supposed moral guide, hesitates to challenge Lady Lilliana’s behaviour. However, he shows a modicum of compassion by ensuring that Emily is sent to the workhouse. In stark contrast stands Annie, a character born into poverty who later ascended to wealth through marriage. Her unique perspective is shaped by her first-hand experience of hunger and hardship. Having lived through the challenges of the lower class, Annie possesses a deep empathy for those who continue to struggle. This duality in Annie’s character illustrates the complexity of class dynamics and highlights how personal experiences can mould one’s approach to compassion and charity in a world divided by economic disparity.

If you have a passion for sweeping family sagas, then the Hartford Manor series is an absolute must-read. This captivating collection weaves together rich narratives, intricate character development, and a vivid portrayal of the historical era, making it an exceptional choice for fans of quality historical fiction.

Review by Mary Anne Yarde
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Marcia Clayton


A farmer’s daughter, Marcia Clayton, was born in North Devon, a rural and picturesque area in the far South West of England. When she left school, Marcia worked in a bank for several years until she married her husband, Bryan, and then stayed at home for a few years to care for her three sons, Stuart, Paul, and David. 

As the children grew older, Marcia worked as a Marie Curie nurse caring for the terminally ill and later for the local authority managing school transport. Now a grandmother, Marcia enjoys spending time with her family and friends. She is a keen researcher of family history, and this hobby inspired some of the characters in her books. Marcia and Bryan are keen gardeners and grow many of their own vegetables. 

An avid reader, Marcia can often be found with her nose in a book when she should be doing something else! Her favourite genres are historical fiction, romance, and crime books. Marcia has written five books in the historical family saga, “The Hartford Manor Series”, and is working on the sixth. Besides writing books, Marcia produces blogs to share with her readers in a monthly newsletter. 

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