"The Witch of Godstow Abbey", the second instalment in the Murders in the Abbey series by Lady Harriet and Peter Stephenson, draws the reader back into a world where quiet devotion sits uneasily beside old fears of The Adversary—a devil-worshipping cult. What unfolds is a mystery shaped with the steady hand of seasoned storytellers, blending rich detail with a slow-rising tension that proves utterly compelling.
Rumours drifting through Oxford are disquieting enough, but when the sacrificed piglets are discovered within the Abbey's gardens, whispered unease gives way to stark alarm. The abbey attempts—without much success—to keep the matter quiet, but soon everyone knows, and the sense of fear and accusations curls through its halls like smoke. The plot develops with admirable assurance, each chapter revealing another sliver of truth. There is a trust in the reader here: the authors allow the shadows to gather gradually, confident that we will follow where they lead.
The ritual pyre found on the hillside is particularly striking, an image that lingers long after it is described. It signals a shift in the narrative, hinting that something older, darker, and far more evil is moving beneath the surface. Friar Thomas’s arrival brings this unease into sharper focus; his rigid authority and thinly veiled suspicion add both political and personal strain to an already fragile situation. Alexis’s sudden return, long thought impossible, hints at a world beyond the abbey walls far stranger—and far more perilous—than anyone dares admit.
The pacing is carefully judged. Moments of quiet contemplation are allowed to breathe, offering insight into the characters’ inner lives, while scenes of heightened tension tighten the narrative at just the right moments. A few conversations run a touch longer than strictly necessary, but even these offer glimpses of personality, doubt, and motive, so they never feel misplaced.
The setting, however, is where this novel shines brightest. Godstow Abbey is brought to life with such care that it becomes a character in its own right. From the cool hush of the workroom to the cloister garden—now boasting a few rather poisonous plants that certainly weren’t there before—the abbey feels lived-in and authentic. Beyond its walls stretch fens wrapped in the golden glow of sunlight, brooding woods, and the haunting remnants of an old Templar house—a landscape that seems to breathe with its own quiet secrets. These elements enrich the story with a tangible sense of place, never overwhelming the narrative but instead deepening its texture.
The characters are equally engaging. Sister Agnes remains the calm centre of the tale—learned, observant, and quietly formidable. Isabel, a young lay sister, continues to grow into a capable investigator, her courage and compassion making her instantly sympathetic. Mother Alice steers her community with a blend of strength and gentleness that marks her as a truly memorable figure. Lady Beatrix brings sharp intelligence and decisiveness to the investigation, while Friar Thomas, unsettling in both presence and purpose, feels as though he has stepped straight from the pages of history. Alexis, enigmatic as ever, adds a dreamlike shimmer to the narrative—an unsettling reminder that reason and belief do not always sit comfortably together.
The dual timeline adds another intriguing layer. Away from the abbey, we follow Lady Harriet in her role as a genealogist, delving into her family’s past. Her discoveries shed new light on the historical figures woven throughout the novel, enriching the reader's understanding of both her lineage and the events echoing across the centuries. This thread binds past and present in a way that feels organic and satisfying, giving the novel an added depth.
Beneath the twists and revelations runs a thoughtful exploration of belief, loyalty, and the fragility of sanctuary. Godstow may be a place of peace, yet it is increasingly hemmed in by external pressures and older, more primitive evils that could destroy everything.
Richly atmospheric and quietly gripping, "The Witch of Godstow Abbey" is a worthy addition to your bookshelf. Lady Harriet and Peter Stephenson have crafted a mystery that lingers long after its final page—evocative, immersive, and beautifully wrought. It is, quite simply, a joy to read.
Review by Mary Anne Yarde
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